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1. Chapter 12 absolute being light sword
   
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3. The road pointed according to the big elder, new zero have already walked for 23 days, but the slightest still keep disappearing big person of virtue's transmission to order thus more special place.Night again deep, on the road, new zero think a lot of, first is to spirit You You, how say, she will on her own initiative kiss me and dedicate her precious of beginning kiss to me, absolutely is what I can't anticipate, however this kiss, I also discovered my calmly, this heart which kisses to just stir up me, the reality of deep place, in fact I don't know to when rise and have already fancied this elf, just oneself don't believe just.Perhaps say that she basically is a not spirit but a goblin which hangs up a public soul.
   
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5. Thought of here, new zero not from start to float a silk smile, start to remember to order intravenous drop drop with You You together.The unexpectedly first gaffe says a colleague companion arrive end return true become reality.However, I think, I was also the only a person who worries about own contractual spirit.New zero there is 1 kind preparing feeling, this distance go to big person of virtue that is dangerous.Change to be other people, meet this kind of circumstance to even want to take up the spirit, strengthen own real strenght, just in case.But ……added feeling is one word, everything is different.Thought of here, new zero suddenly new Lians smiling face, pour on the lawn, Zhen wear own hands, however the second problem have a little nerve-racking, he is a face to deeply sink and look up at star sky.Arrive currently for this, I have already practiced next ten, but still can't attain the state for have no, so of words, don't know when then can stir up a strength of sword, although the sword soul has already stilled say to have a kind of method and can also stir up, however is what, even it also doesn't know, ah, , run its course.
   
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7. Suddenly, new zero discover forest one silent, have no one silk voice, he felt wrong.Foolish in this world not a few day, should have of the vigilance ability also had.The future isn't kind is up, new zero 1 jump but rise, the hand tightly and tightly presses down check handle, concentrate to eye front, before long, indeed as expected, the front appeared a sand a sand of voice, a dark shadow appears gradually in his in front, whole body silver A, at luminous under concealed now, only weak, but still can distinguish is male, age at about 30~40 years old, permit from the noodles to analytical, is a white man, have a little similar in on the earth Euro-American person."I have no malice!"Very obviously, the other party is a facing oneself come of, he saw lately zero of guard, busy explanation way.Probably he also stands in no fear of to fear to lately zero, but a little enemy always quite good of."Who are you ?"New zero ignore his words, counter-question a way:"I call the He virtuous Si man•Lang Mu Si, I have no malice and just ask a road!"The name is very long, new zero lazy have to record, 1 gets lost a person and take care of so many why, new zero relax down."Execuse me, I ain't a person here either and I am also walk faster.""Have no matter, as long as tell me, whether you knows to lead to spirit path which direction or not?"That person inquiry way, not the Kun be not slow.However hear this words, new zero 1 Zhengs, the spirit path is also the entrance which leads to a spirit clan and is conceal of, can't be know by the outsider of, if don't be to meet You You, new zero anyway also can not find, however when he leave, the spirit king repeatedly instructed him, slicing to record can't talk about this matter with outsider, and melting our clansmen very may disappear from the history.
   
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9. For this, new zero believe deeply to doubt not, necessarily forbid the come-on of spirit to say to person to be huge.New zero immediately return to absolute being, he cover up of milk good, "sorry, I have never heard!""So, that I walk this road, thank you!"That person's politely say that finish, toward walking ago.New zero 1 see, immediately silly eye, this isn't the way which leads to spirit path."This big uncle don't go to that direction like?"That person one Zheng inquiry way:"What problem?"New zero 1 Lengs turned to turn an eyeball:"E, is so, there monster with sink well at most …… not a few people all die over there ……" new zero haven't say that finish, that several person's cachinnations:"Don't beat tightly, small brothers, I have at least of ability, also be unlikely afraid these thing, still keep thank you!"
   
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11. Say that finish again quasi- walk, new zero hurriedly shout a way:"Don't go, that way is really dangerous!""Hi, I say small brothers ……I walk mine, with you relate to not and greatly, do your own business go to, leave me alone!"That person had one silk impatient."Not!In fine you can't walk there!"New zero wrinkled up eyebrows, hear this words, that person started to be be suspicious:Your boy is very strange, why prohibit me to walk, difficult way you know what?""Cough, I what also don't know, I am also an other parts of country person!"New zero intentionally cough 1, cover up an own heart."Don't know and then don't meddle in other people's business!"Arrive at this time, that person's voice has already become cold."Not!You can't walk there!"He knows to can not help a terrific fight, comply with the surrounding to draw out lance, a Keng Qiang later on, new zero horizontal swordses stare at that person:"Have skill you to trample my corpse past!""Not, I don't want to do meaningless affair of honor!"That person cold way:"Please don't force me!"He has already had a silk not a set a color, moved to a double-edged sword side up.New zero realize, tiny on smile stretch hand a way:"Elder generation, you please first!"That person a knit the brows:"BE is not as long as I can win you, do you no longer worry me?"
    
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13. New zero:00 of"can say so" nod, start to flick sword:"So-called become Wang2 Bai4 Ji2, this be also the old rules of river's lake, strong representative everything, you can win me and I then also had nothing to say!""Good!Depend on how are you?"A Keng Qiang voice lead, a double-edged sword signs but holds, that person have no hesitant, he can't be foolish here to get too long."We order!"That person suggestion way, however drive immediately new zero veto:"Don't go, we not is learn by exchanging views skill in martial arts!""You really need to play big of?"
    
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15. That person asks a way.The He virtuous Si man sees lately zero don't answer, two words don't say that flick sword but rise, his hands flick sword, according to luck achievement track move a double-edged sword, one hoarse Ming spreads from the sword body, the sword body doesn't already rock and send out 1 F gold green of sheen, He virtuous Si man luggage, deliver beard calm also from move."BE ……sword spirit!"See a form, new zero dark and surprised, see from this circumstance the other party discover of pour is the sword spirit which seems very much in the biggest Chuang sword country villa on the earth.If is really such, so absolutely can't resist with the dint of the F.But the other party an Euro-American and old ghost kind with what meeting we does the China continental sword annoy?New zero Chas 100 think can not its solution.However more strange affair took place at this time, new zero swords in the handses started reaction, a burst of Si Ming the voice spreads from the sword body.Return again later on in dead silent.Is this what mean?Don't say lately zero, the He virtuous Si man this expert also doesn't understand.However, this isn't the key, he flicks to have lance, his body turn rises repeatedly tornado, "BE what you force!"He cool way, immediately after, eye pupil a fierce, the lance complies with the surrounding to stab, everything stopped, and his hair silk and body take to no longer float to move.But new zero understand this is not what good matter, only 1 kind may, all sword the spirit was all remitted this by him to stab a sword of and that transparent sword's annoy was come over with the speed impact which looks like velocity of light.How to do?New zero now want to think of not and how dissolve, but how reduce the injury to the least, sword country villa with sword spirit Zhao call,
    
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17. Have never been dissolved by the person, new zero natureses also don't make this to think.Instinct of, he the horizontal sword resist, this recruit exertive some function, the sword spirit bumped shot to arrive sword body, force him to continuously retreat, how can also what then however this handle sword."Indeed as expected not the Kui be a double-edged sword!"New zero Cha time the whole godses left sword this word, but at this time, the affair is uncanny any further.Lately zero lances suddenly become bright, sword spirit is inhaled so lance, then, lance a bright, and then recover silvery.This pretty move, let both parties get a shock, "BE this kind of felling again ……" is againnew zero the Wu arrived what, the He virtuous Si man of "sword, difficult way the consciousness which is me ……" but the other party starts discover wrong:"Just and what is the row, if isn't personally see, who believe this kind of matter?The sword eats sword spirit"the He virtuous Si man put out strength to sway to sway head and again sway sword.New zero suddenly the brain one be pure and clear:"Wrong, this sword country villa is all …… he has no that kind of an elegant felling ……" is immediately after new zero shut ascend eyes:"Search just that kind of a felling ……" suddenly the luck soul of sword work properly to again appear in his contemplation:"Host, this be the key!""What?"New zero 1 surprised, the favour cross-examines a way.But, the sword soul be become thin:"Remember, will also publish from the surface of heart, his brain onlies have a few phrases now, the surface of heart, follow an exhibition, lance, surface ……right, is this answer!"The pair matches lance in the absolute being know, new zero felt energy, is a hand up of.He opens eyes, the sword in the hand already the quickly passing time overflow colourful.New zero smile, so that's why.Absolute being ……new zero the brain flash acrosses be a words, absolute being?New zero know that the lance apparently thinks that informing to give him an information but oneself's hasing no absolute being will arrive.He also doesn't pursue, now is a backstroke of time, he agley starts to point sword:" The sword spirit of the sword country villa, although not Jing, have never decline as well!"New zero orthoptic and the second-time set ofs come of sword spirit, quickly horizontal cut lance, a black green of only take to take off sword but, in a twinkling broke up his sword spirit."You ……China person?"The He virtuous Si man apparently was aware of what.New zero do not answer him, cold see him."Good!Today stop here, however China the person remember, well live enough this several days!"Say that finish, he takes out a transmission stalk and disappeared after white light.
    
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19. "Did you get?"A whole body Xian army system type the person of the clothing sits before office desk to ask a way."Have no, superior!"Another person say."Have no?The mission failure of"he raised head doubt ground to hope his one eye, eyebrows on pick, "?"He is some to dare not believe.The He virtuous Si man explanation way:"Execuse me, superior, order small mistake!""Mistake?The conductor department has already confirmed to sit a mark without any error, complete with transmission winding inside of similar!"That grasps a Yi way:"Will mark yes right!"The He virtuous Si man affirmation way:"So, can you not find spirit?"That person asks a way again."The superior take charge of and have a ZG person the bar!""ZG person?Do you make not certain?"That person dared not believe at 1:00.The He virtuous Si man of"yes, belong to next doubt a his hand in of the weapon be peculiar" say."What weapon?"That person shut worthy of a look, depend on the chair to ask a way."Sword, superior!"The He is virtuous to answer a way."Sword?……All right, you descend first to go to, in a couple of days, you send a few cutthroats and chased his Jiao!"That person still keeps lightly saying."Thank a superior!"He went the military salute then left room."Sword?……That is silent to read aloud a way.
    
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21. At this time, new zero was already the fifth day which leaves spirit tribe, press the truth to say, the big elder say of transmission should right here, but surroundings in addition to a tree be still a tree.New zero sighed tone:"Return is really a saint be concealed to return, how seek to all have no clues!"He seeks a piece of lawn, leaned against a tree to sit next go to.Remember to have this all the way last matter, ever since that time last time and that the Euro-American person be old one war, new zero seem to the Wu arrived what, that language has been flick it don't go, print in his brain:"Follow the lance of exhibition from the surface of heart will cause a surprised big wave ……" wants that always have a kind of felling with unidentified way, but be think to be not thorough, this of the phrase is to say what, also have it of next again is what?He stares at to begin medium sword, the sword is still dead atmosphere, have no the slightest spiritual influence, after sword soul disappeared last time, everythings all had no felling.The key that perhaps all problem Tus save was big person of virtue ……new zero from think a way.Can at this time, some dark shadows held up his at present ray, he is one Zheng, wide awake from the deep thought and in the moment and just stand four black dress persons."Is you a XG person?"Lately zero just thought an answer, and then turned to read on think, how want thus ask, the matter was different and he started be vigilant:"You is ……""however, the black dress person didn't realize him, with each other to one eye, the small track of one among those persons:"Outward appearance and employer of similar!"Say that finish did a signal for kill, immediately after four silver light flash acrosses.New zero understand, oneself bothered greatly.Quickly pull out sword but rise, can he discovers this 4 people and last time that Euro-American guy compare and once had but all and, he can not help have a little the primes become numb.4 sword blades inheritted to come over, new zero hurried cope with, block 4 swords by 1 swords, but, enemy my real strenght not and all and at present what to present be a situation which necessarily changes.Suddenly, 4 black clothes persons accept to recruit in the meantime, however new zero have no loose one breath, on the contrary more nervous, accept to recruit at this time, could it be that want a sword to pull out.The Chi-ear spreads a sound for sharpen, in 4 black dress persons change magically into the flick of shadow sort cut, numerous transparent sword long grasses are lately miscellaneous to have no chapter ground to rush at zero, new zero lost all interest, oneself will only have were become by the Duo the end of minced meat, livability also is 0.He bittens to grind teeth, on the face and burst out a determination in the look in the eyes, he will offer Jiang dint ground to fight for and a sword sword flicks, a sword sword takes out back, and numerous problems get up in his brain inflation:"What is the meaning that I do so ?""My mission just saves the Earth, they are again who ……" thinks that the top of the face is abrupt however a cool, and in fine threads and painful.New zero touched touch, together stuck to a red Xuan body to influence gradually his middle finger and index finger.He stopped down and gradually imitated Fo all things to calmed down down.New zero foolish remit ground to hope to return is continuously rushing at his sword long grass,
    
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23. An is in the moment an all such slowness, but will arrive it, and then change magically into a to open the devil of huge mouth, just like want to gobble up oneself.Present that blue clothes scientist to die again in"-" brain of bellow a voice, endless mournful, the tears beats gradually wet his eyes, "from the surface of heart follow the lance of exhibition will cause a surprised big wave ……" this sentence again presents in his brain and a difficult to express exasperation beginning inflate.The nail chokes gradually into the center of palm, the eyes gradually take off to turn, full eyes red, "from the heart of surface ……cause a surprised big wave ……surprised big wave ……surprised big wave!"Moment, new zero just like fraud depressed for a long time general, bellow, the energy in the body such as surprised fusion general moment release, everything again started move, lately zero of the chest be violent to rise and fall and take inside the dint send out of shout, several ear drums that the desire pierces owner, return to concuss in square circle a few kilometers, huge energy pound at, in a twinkling collapse the forests soils in one kilometer to break up, appear a diameter up the big pits of 100 meters.The strength of the lance is released and he represses not to live any further:"I am me, I can't depart from this life, also have a lot of matters to wait for me do, destiny is my own, who don't also want to change it, even the end final outcome be similar!"Suddenly, heart of jump and move a kind of much more medium strength, this be the rare strength.The voice that a Man prepare appears in his ear side:"Congratulate you, young man, you chose right answer, the felling which follows you walk, and everythings all will end!"See the Jing short sentence, but the word word hear and prepare the United States sweet, was full of the United States of the nature, but new zero but don't pursue this who it, but still she it the speech did.The white light leads place, the space smashed everything, sword the spirit generally pierced through 4 people just like the flood dragon, descend a moment, 4 cut-off heads take surprised slide neck.This well proved this to recruit to namely die, they connected ache of the feeling too late discovers.Again immediately after, top body and descend a body a piece ofly an abruption to open, is smashed slowly, new zero shut to close  eyes, quell own motion to again open eyes, but discover a palm tree deliver beauty to appear at him in the moment, his eyes shear water, the Gao is vigorously pure white, shape Gao Tiao , slender waist Ying once the Ying hold, cherry lips and Ying nose at she originally the powder delicate face up add brilliance more.New zero was like this time similar start beat ghost idea before, but hope her that quietly detailed with of face, give person a kind of heart such as water of felling, beauty, sacred but again lovely, the demand hope so and then make his in the mind matchless quite, everything of is throw not and quickly and all of brain empress."Perfect!"He cans not help a mumbling way.But spread a voice which once listenned to lately from her, just like dream world general, again gentle and soft water:"Young man, everything you express this several days has already meet my request, if want to complete you of mission, please with me!"New zero suddenly smiled:"So that's why, indeed as expected such as elder say not person's boundary is all ……" this is the slightest heartfelt to praise highly, but have no the Shen of desire miscellaneous, for this kind of beauty, new zero have already grown a humble felling.
    
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25. Follow the beauty walked to a sorcery that don't know to when appear before, the soft if boneless Xian hand grasped him, his whole body is one Zheng, he hopes earnestly to hold this hands dead hopeless situation never releases in the oneself's hand, but she is too noble.Descend a moment, one Wei national prosperity light flash across, they in the moment appeared a floret park with a small house.New zero immediately understood everything.The beauty was loose to open a her hand, start introduce myself, "young man, I am big person of virtue Jin ……very happy can see you!"Can she but slowly could not wait lately zero of return to introduction, however she smiled again right away, new at this time zero again is drawn on by moreover two angels, angel?That's right, is really the angel is three rightnesses of snow-white have no time of the wing be long in carry on the back, a face powders are delicate, all own shape and facial appearance of one second to Jin, unique differently woulded be the facial expression of face, one was innocent, one is cool to become steady.They two Wans began to walk to come over.The Jin starts introduce again:"These two good friends who is me, look lovely of this be stars snow!""How are you!"The stars snow powder face is tiny and red, ordered to nod and send out of the voice be matchless of softness sweet, listen to lately the odd change skin become numb and the in the mind almost grasps to guess:"Perfect!What a Perfect!When did I once see such bewitching female."New zero think that hugging her into a bosom embrace at this time, the tight hug lives that Ying Ying a hold of slender waist.However at this time, big person of virtue Jin started introduce another beauty and new zero can put out strength to swallow saliva."This be stars water Yun!""Very happy know you!"Water Yun ceremonious way.Although she also blocks a time with stars snow 1, regrettable her voice is always cheerless, let lately zero can't YY, can respect but far of.New zero understand, new come down should he, his smile way:"New in the bottom zero, very happy understanding everyone!"Say that finishing him stretches out hand preparation and Jin to shake hands, can the Jin be just smile, he stretches again toward water Yun, water Yun also didn't act, still keep lightly hoping him, stretch again toward stars snow, he be just blush with shame red of, also didn't act.New zero the hands be one Zhan and almost overcome not to live, but hold tight a her hand.The end didn't have a person to shake hands with him, he can the Nao wore a head to embarrassedly smile to smile.The Jin saw his embarrassed Tai, immediately break siege a way:"Like, new zero, let's say proper business!What difficulty do you seek me to have to want my help?"
    
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1. Finish listen to, new zero almost say I want to embrace stars snow, however, he immediately overcame."I ain't the person of this world!"New zero hope a way, the Jin ordered to nod.New zero:"Do you believe?""Ha ha, your business, I know a little of it!"The Jin say with smile.New zero also no longer say:"Do I want to know that what this world exactly once took place?My Shan wants to solve this affair, save our worlds!""Actually, the mistake is you, rather than we are this world and your worlds are eventually ruined something to drop by yourselves!"The Jin says "I don't understand ……" new zero puzzling:"Everything is greatly white from the meeting, I have no way to speak what, everything have to be discover by you, perhaps when the time comes, you understood!"The Jin say."That I should now how do?"New zero ask a way:"This be the correct problem!However you go first a rest today, everythings all will publish for you tomorrow ……"the Jin say with smile.
   
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3. The twilight condescend to come, new zero sit on own room to deliberate what, but at this time, stars snow and stars water Yun stand to chat outdoors at him."Elder sister, why was he ed unlike a last time to hide us so?"Stars snow Zheng wears big eyes to ask a way."Want to hide to also hide not come, I miss his 1 may be to forget, 2 may be to trust big person of virtue, all not afraid we!"Water Yun analysis way."You want to really think, say with her!"Water Yun does power and walk."Elder sister, your etc. I call!"Stars snow cans not help small face pink."Why?"Water Yun intentionally asks a way."Good, good!"Stars snow writes to withdraw a Jiao way at the water Yun bosom Ceng."Good!Really can not stand you!"Water Yun didn't like a spirit way."Thank elder sister!"Say that finish was lately then blunt to enter zero building inside."This wench enters a door and knock on door and seeing to that boy can take advantage of!"The water Yun hands embrace to sigh a way."Sir?Sir!"Stars snow calls a way."?What?What is the row?"Lately zero of contemplate a quilt her call come back, however see at present person's son, the heart palpitates unexpectedly started accelerate.However, he pretend angry:"How to don't knock on door?Scared me?"Simultaneously complied with the surrounding to guard a gate a head.Stars snow but ignore, still keep calling a way:"Sir ……""get, don't call Sir, call my zero elder brotherses, otherwise husband all right!"New zero understand she the girl of this kind of personality like to play trick.BE indeed as expected say by water Yun medium, new zero start share her cheapness.Stars snow has his face raddens all over after listen to:"Do not blather ……" is new zero can ask your a question?"What advantage?"New zero laugh merrily a way."What advantage do you want?"Stars snow thoughts very purely, not understand lately zero of meaning.New zero suddenly shameless, make track for a girl not thick don't go, he pulls stars snow to the side and silently the voice says to the her ear:"BE my wife?""?"Stars snow is greatly abashed, " dislike, dislike, just don't !"
   
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5. She strike and kick a burst of, new zero unexpectedly and dead straight pour next go to.Stars snow is one Zheng and the Fu snows a body to go to, there is a silk worry:"You, have no matter?I seem didn't how make an effort!"When her Fu arrives to leave lately zero faces of not enough 5 cmses, new zero fiercely sit, hold close her, and quickly contain her small mouth, her face immediately rises fresh and red, keep struggle, want to flounce him, but have never touched opposite sex of she, suddenly felt a men's body temperature and strength, very quickly soft come down.However small face more and more red, new zero understand is what is the row, be don't loosen, unbridled suck to absorb her sweet, counteract sweetener to push open her cherry lips, entwine her that lovely of continuously resist of small tongue.New zero discover to touch to touch her tongue first time, she then will shock once and return is really an impressionable girl.For a long time behind, new zero finally loose open mouth, she immediately pants like cow:"Shout Chi, shout Chi, you think that the fraud die me ……" can suddenly she thoughts of again what, eyes a flat, order a radiant beginning to gleam:"Somebody else of beginning kiss …… drive you ……" she also regardless of return a quilt lately zero embraced to so cry.New zero silly eye, he is on impulse, also forgot this problem, he onlies have a way, or not become, make to doom:"Snow snow, do you like me?BE my wife good?If was my wife, so you of the beginning kiss and then have no waste!"New zero simultaneously fondle the skin that she slip part muttering way:"Don't , just don't…………" she the suddenly light Chen be 1, new zero kissed her neck, and continuously follow neck to downwards kiss, had been kiss till chest which two towering jade Fengs, although isn't very big, in particular captivating.New zero ask again:"Are you my wife?Don't do me to bite!"See stars snow responded, new zero no longer hesitant, immediately across her blouse clothes, contained that beautiful pride, stars snow again is one Zhan, whole body at new zero bosoms repeatedly mix to move.New zero immediately the period of interview of enlargement dint suck to absorb that small red bean, once stars snow shock, a while call make a noise:"I answer ……in response to ……!"Stars snow really canned not stand and was shiver and answering a way.Two of her hands are after death embrace by new zero dead deadses can'ting push away her, feel of chest again cold she is hard to repress and have to surrender.New zero this just loose openingses, stars snow put out strength to breathe heavily tone, stare him, "you ……strong ……I!""Strong you?Strong what you?"New zero intentionally ask a way.See stars snow face again red, he kisses the place of her blush with shame and gentle and softly say:"Does the small girl when likes my ?So literally promise to be my wife""slice, little boast, is what you force, ah, don't say, I occupy to ask you!"Stars snow wants to flounce him.But he is to don't put, "have what matter say so, anyway you are my wife to have what relation!""Who is your wife!"Stars snow Du rises a small mouth."Yi?BE not?That may I listenned to wrong and continue to bite!"New zero lower the head again to contain her chest.She feared and have to Be shiver and say"new zero ……zero elder brothers ha …………husband!"Shout a husband, new zero just loose:"What matter, wife?"
   
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7. Stars snow hopes his that shameless appearance, way:"Give me a little times to consider, I really can't promise you all of a sudden!"Looking at stars snow delicate and touching, new zero really want to immediately ate her, the regrettable girl can't be nasty to force, otherwise meeting get just the opposite, new zero have to loose open her.Stars snow is once soft to pour in the ground and see to her really be subjected to huge incitement.She climbed to get up red the face ask a way:"In fact I come to is to want ask once ……do you like a fire or an ice?"The time that she ask dares not a rise."Fire?Ice ……what fire ……"suddenly, new zero understood her meaning, the Luo Luo is evil to say with smile:"Originally the young lady pine for opposite sex, no wonder that how all don't resist!Certainly is a fire!"Stars snow is one Zheng, the small face of beautiful desire drop is again a burst of and red and dizzy, she the small voice say:"You request that I will consider once!"Then withdrew a leg to run room.Leaves lately zero constantly smile, constantly smile.
   
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9. Originally see stars snow go in so long all don't come out of water Yun oddness, see her a face again red even the roads all walk not like, also understood:"Didn't …… not …… I want to consider once ……" of"younger sister, you are true of with him ……" stars snow is oncethin like gnat."Ah, do you really like him?"Water Yun asks a way.Stars snow is a little bit silent to nod:"From see him for the first time personality with that kind of ……" makes reference to this, stars snow face again red.Water Yun hears here, and then sees his dress Chinese fir not whole, a kind of very sour felling is abundant her atrium, even herself also not is understand what is the row."Does that elder brother agree?"Water Yun asks a way."The elder brother is the most painful ours, certain meeting!"Stars snow is a face happiness."That you still consider what, you doesn't this have already promised?"Water Yun adjusts to say with smile.", Elder sister, you humiliate me and ignored you!"Say that finish, liked to away and disappear run.Water Yun smiles to see her to disappear, the in the mind acerbity again upsurges, her eyes hope to watch from a distance lately zero rooms, a face sad, however very quick she then left.However the all these was hidden in the Jin of roof to see, :"Good boy, the love affairs leaves you not far!"She say with smile.
   
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11. On the second day, new zero have greatly and early, get up the first matter to hurtle stars snow doorway to wait for after an hour, stars snow opens a door and get a fright:"You ……are you why?"She sees new zero dead straight stand on the doorway to stare at her:"Do you come to a decision?"New zero in earnest ask a way." ……What?"Stars snow in the mind is a burst of and nervous and increase heart beats."Forget it!"New zero don't want to order again clear, see to matter still not become, he lower the head:"Let … down … yesterday …… embarrassed …… but ……" he again raises head a light tone way:"I really like you- probably was a body in the beginning, can connect you now of mind …… I also ……" he suddenly stopped:"I will wait!"Say that finish, then left.At this time water Yun is from the house in walked to come out:"Why don't promise!"But stars snow an on every occasion hope the place that he leave:"Elder sister, I am so afraid ……fall in love at first sight true existence?""The feeling in the truth or falsity originally is empty, like be like, have never exist what lie quality, so-calledly fall in love at first sight just a hall but hall it of lend just, the love follows a felling to walk ……never carry oneself!"Water Yun say that finish, see stars snow ordered to nod, oneself can not help the heart is from the way:"But ……say so, why I also the Han is like does this treat own affection?Feeling ……why thing ……"she is a face to deeply sink.
    
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13. New zero walked to alone in the place with a draught, is kissing an own luggage with the strong wind winding, everything come and go flowed to flee in his brain, he in fact is at frightened, but he discovers that he arrives at this world of, he understood, "what rescue world?In fact however is to escape to ruinedly lend, and then thought of to lend a night of stimulated, because of frightened can not get person's son in the heart, unexpectedly use that kind of shameless means, and still rent away the count for much thing of a girl ……I exactly at stem what ……"his head not mark a beginning some dazzle dizzy."New zero ……" after death spreads a voice of soft United States him the head also doesn't return, the future is who he already very know:"Big person of virtue can start!"The Jin smiled to smile:"This boy return doesn't the body know blessing in the blessing!"The Jin walks to him nearby, " the breeze is big here and return to garden!"Say that finish, two people then a left is rightly going toward back to walk."I have a problem to want to ask you!"New zero suddenly thoughted of what."Ask!"The Jin hopes him."I listen to other people say that you aren't kind it's close, can I discover to completely so return to matter!"New zero also hope to she."Ha ha, do you want to let me so?"The Jin say with smile."E ……certainly-not!"New zero the favour be hermeneutic."Said white, to own friend just can't so ……but you are more lucky ……let me incredibly appreciate you ……so you still the first become me would like to close person!"The Jin smiled again:"How?Are you to want to start proper business, or chat with me?"" ……Proper business, certainly!"New zero some embarrassed."Good ……" Jin suddenly accepted sword smiling face:"Present my what yesterday said, you of the mission have been very explicit, this target that is you, hence you want to do currently of nothing but not is become a strong, only own arrogant strength, you then can be free from stipulation ground to do oneself want to do of matter.""H'm ……but ……how strong?"New zero ask a way:"Become a strong's doesing not be to teach you how to cook a meal, this is not review an argument can express of thing, what it depend is a kind of power of understanding."The Jin hopes to watch from a distance lately zero:"You are a sword warrior!"New zero nod."A sword private, strong don't be to have how strong strength with incomparable technique, but to the power of understanding of sword, on having innate intelligence the good sword, if you can feel his breathing, then can become real swordsman!"The Jin stretches out a hand:"You that kind of the sword sees to me can?"" Certainly!"New zero immediately drew out sword.The Jin is one Zheng and put out strength Zheng big eye, "this is ……" she is a face of astonished connected to come over, use that jade hand lightly fondles smooth silver blade."What problem?"New zero could not see what's wrong."The end decision is after the soul go back and forth ……" she suddenly starts to read aloud 1 like the silver blade of poetry:"Wrong not …… this is ……" of"when the blood integrates memory, everything would over ……" she is matchless to arouse to move:"New zero, do you know what sword this is?""……Sword ……?"New zero still keep don't understand."This be the absolute being sword, don't you know?"The Jin turns to read again a want to also release however, thousand years don't now of absolute being sword, he how may an outsider understand again?"Jin, although don't know is what sword, I know it owns very terrible strength, but I can't freely stir up!"New zero hope Jin."Not, wrong, new zero, how much time do you have?"The Jin asks a way:"Have plenty of!"New zero."I to teach him!"After death spread another Jiao the United States at this time but again smile of cheerless Jin:"New zero, the positive drama started!""Who say is not?"New zero immediately also understood.

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Revival

{/qiang}这是你写的？{/fd}

玄月

那Title让我想起了呼啸山庄…………虽然我很多看不懂

雪流星

中文可以贴出来吗？
看似Google或百度、yahoo等翻译引擎翻译的

星辰天羽

以下引用snstar2006于2008-11-12 0:12:46的发言：

中文可以贴出来吗？
看似Google或百度、yahoo等翻译引擎翻译的

金山翻译的……

星辰天羽

中文意思：

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1. 第十二章   神光剑
   
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3. 按照大长老指的路，新零已经走了两三天了，而丝毫还是不见大贤者传送点这样比较特别的地方。夜又深了，这些天，在路上，新零想了很多，首先是对精灵幽幽，怎么说，她会主动来吻我，献出她宝贵的初吻给我，绝对是我所无法预料到的，不过这一吻，我也发现了我的从容，这一吻才激发出我内心深处的真实，其实我不知道从什么时候起就已经喜欢上了这个小精灵了，只是自己不相信罢了。
   
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5. 或者说她根本不是精灵而是一个勾人心魂的小妖精。想到这里，新零不由浮起一丝微笑，回想起与幽幽在一起的点点滴滴。没想到最初的口误把伙伴说成伴侣到最终还真成现实了。
   
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7. 不过，我想，我也是唯一一个为自己的契约精灵担心的人了吧。新零有一种预感，此程去大贤者那，必有险恶。换作别人，遇到这种情况更要带上精灵，加强自己的实力，以防万一了。可是……加了情一字，一切就不一样了。想到这里，新零突然收敛了笑容，倒在草地上，枕着自己的双手，不过第二个问题就有点伤脑筋了，他一脸的深沉，仰望星空。
   
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9. 到目前为此，我已经练了不下十次，但仍无法达到无的境界，这样的话，不知道什么时候才能激发出剑的力量啊，虽然剑魂有说还有一种方式也可以激发，不过是什么，就连它也不知道，哎，罢，顺其自然吧。
   
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11. 突然，新零发觉森林一片寂静，没有了一丝声音，他感觉到了不对。在这个世界呆了不少天了，突然发现自己居然有感应危险与气息的能力了,不知道是不是环境改变人类呢?来者不善为上，新零一跃而起，手紧紧按住了剑柄，凝神注视前方，不久后，果然，前方传来了沙沙的声音，一个黑影逐渐出现在他面前，一身银甲，在夜光下时隐时现，光弱，但仍可分辨出是个男性，年龄在30~40岁左右，从面容来分析，是个白人，有点类似于地球上的欧美人。
    
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13. “我没有恶意！”很显然，对方是向着自己来的，他看到了新零的警戒，忙解释道。或许他并不畏惧新零，但少一个敌人总是没错的。“你是谁？”新零不理会他的话，反问道：“我叫诃德斯夫朗姆斯，我没有恶意，只是来问个路的！”名字很长，新零懒得去记，一个迷路人，管那么多干嘛，新零立即放松下来。“对不起，我也不是这里的人，我也在赶路。”“没事，只要告诉我，你是否知道通往精灵路径是哪个方向？”那个人询问道，不紧不慢。不过听到此话，新零一怔，精灵路径也就是通往精灵族的入口，是被隐藏的，不能被外人知道的，若不是遇见了幽幽，新零是无论如何也找不到的，不过在他离开时，精灵王再三嘱咐了他，切记不能同外人论此事，融我们族人很可能从历史上消失。对于这一点，新零深信不疑，必禁精灵的诱惑对人来说说是巨大的。
    
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15. 新零立刻回过神来，他掩饰的很好，“对不起，我没听说过！”“这样啊，那我就走这条路吧，谢谢你！”那人有礼貌地说完，朝前走去。新零一看，立刻傻了眼，这不就是通往精灵路径的道吗。“这位大叔，别去那边好吗？”那人一怔询问道：“有什么问题吗？”新零一愣，转了转眼球：“呃，是这样，那边怪物和陷井最多……不少人都丧命在那里……”新零还没说完，那人大笑几声：“不打紧，小兄弟，我有起码的能力，还不至于怕这些东西，还是谢谢你！”说完又准备走，新零连忙喊道：“不行啊，那条道真的很危险！”“嗨，我说小兄弟……我走我的，和你关系不大吧，干你自己的事去吧，别管我！”那人有了一丝不耐烦。“不！总之你不能走那边！”
    
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17. 新零皱起了眉头，听到这话，那人开始起疑心了：你小子很奇怪啊，为什么不准我走，难道你知道什么？”“咳，我什么也不知道，我也是外地人！”新零故意咳一声，掩饰自己的内心。新零明白自己已经太明显了.“不知道就别多管闲事！”到此时，那人的声音已经变得生冷。“不！你不能走那边！”他知道免不了一场恶战了，顺势抽出长剑，一声铿锵过后，新零横剑凝视着那人：“有本事你踩着我尸体过去！”“不，我不想做无谓的决斗！”那人冷冷道：“请不要逼我！”他已经有一丝怒色了，将手移到了宝剑边上。新零没有理会，微微一笑，伸手道：“前辈，您先请！”那人一皱眉头：“是不是只要我能战胜你，你就成王败寂？”
    
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19. “可以这么说”新零点了点头，挥起剑：“所谓成王败寇，这也是江湖的老规矩，强者代表一切，你能赢我，我便也无话可说了！”“好,就依你如何？”一声铿锵声过后，宝剑立出而握，那人没有犹豫，他不能在这里呆得太久。“我们点到为止！”那人建议道，不过立刻被新零否决了：“不行，我们并非是切磋武艺！”“你真要玩真的？”那人问道。诃德斯夫见新零不答，二话不说挥剑而起，他双手挥剑，按运功轨迹移动宝剑，一声嘶鸣从剑体传出，剑体晃动不已，发出一层金绿色的光泽，诃德斯夫行装，发须也无风自动起来。“是……剑气！”见状，新零暗惊，从这个情况看对方发出的倒很像是地球上赫名大庄名剑山庄的剑气。
    
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21. 如果真是如此，那么凭己之力是绝对无法抵挡的。可是对方一个欧美老鬼样凭什么会我们神洲大陆绝古精仑的剑气呢？新零刹时百思不得其解。不过此时更加奇怪的事情发生了，新零手中的剑开始有了反应，一阵阵嘶鸣声从剑体传出。随后又归于沉寂。这是什么意思？不过，他没有多想，挥起了长剑，他身在处圈起阵阵旋风，“是你逼的！”他淡然道，接着，瞳孔一缩，长剑顺势刺出，一切停止了，他的发丝和身服不再飘动。可是新零明白这并不是什么好事，只有一种可能，所有的剑气都被他汇入了这刺出的一剑，那道透明的剑气正以近似光速的速度冲击过来。怎么办？新零现在所要想的不是怎样化解，而是怎样将伤害减到最小，名剑山庄以剑气著称，从来不曾被人化解过，新零自然也不作此想。本能的，他横剑抵挡，这一招发挥了一点儿作用，剑气撞击到了剑身上，迫使他不断后退，可怎也奈何不过这柄剑。“果然不愧是奇剑！”新零刹时间全神只留下剑这个名词了，而就在这时，事情再次诡异起来。新零的长剑突然变亮，剑气就这么被吸进了长剑里面，然后，长剑一亮，又恢复了银色。这一个变动，让双方大吃一惊，“又是这种感觉……”新零似悟到了什么，“剑，难道是我的意识……”而对面的诃德斯夫开始发觉不对了：“刚才怎么回事，若不是亲眼所见，谁相信这种事？剑吃剑气?”诃德斯夫使劲晃了晃脑袋，再次晃剑。新零突然大脑一片清明：“不对，此式非名剑山庄所有……他并没有那种飘逸的感觉……”接着新零闭上了眼睛：“找寻刚才那种感觉……”突然剑的魂灵再次出现在他冥想中：“主人，这才是关键！”“什么？”新零一惊，忙追问道。而剑魂却正在变淡：“记住，从心之水面延展出的长剑将引起惊涛,但……”刚说完“但”，剑魂便消失了。但什么？新零有一丝郁闷。但他很快就释然了，该知道时，想不知都难。现在他脑海只有几个词，心之水面，沿展，长剑，水面……没错了，是这个答案！”在神识中副合长剑，新零感觉到了能量，是手上的。他睁开眼睛，手中的剑早已流光溢彩了。新零笑了，原来如此。神……新零脑海闪过一个字，神？新零知道长剑似乎想传达给他一个信息可是自己没有神会到。他也不去追究，现在是反击的时候了，他斜斜地指起剑：“名剑山庄的剑气，虽不精，但也不曾没落！”新零直视第二次袭来的剑气，迅速横斩长剑，一条黑绿色的光带脱剑而出，瞬间瓦解了他的剑气。“你……神洲人？”诃德斯夫似乎意识到了什么。新零没有回答他，冷视他。“好！今天到此为止，不过神洲人你记住，好好活够这几天！”说完，他取出一个传送轴，在白光过后消失了。
    
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23. “你得到了吗？”一个全身宾军制式服装的人坐在办公桌前问道。“没有，长官！”另一个人说道。“没有？”他抬起头疑惑地望了他一眼，眉头一挑，“任务失败？”他有些不敢相信。诃德斯夫解释道：“对不起，长官，出了点小差错！”“差错？指挥部已经确认了坐标无误啊，完全和传送卷里的一样！”那个抓疑道：“是的，会标没错！”诃德斯夫肯定道：“那么，你找不到精灵？”那人又问道。“长官司，有一个XG人阻碍！”“XG人？你搞不定？”那人有一点不敢相信。“是的，属下怀疑他手中的武器有古怪”诃德斯夫说道。“什么武器？”那人闭上眼，靠在椅子上问道。“剑，长官！”诃德答道。“剑？……好吧，你先下去，过几天，你派几个杀手，把他剿了！”那人仍然淡淡地说道。“多谢长官！”他行了个军礼便离开了房间。“剑？……那个默默念道。
    
24. 此时，新零已经是离开精灵部落的第五天了，按道理来说，大长老说的传送阵应该就在这里了，可是周围除了树还是树。新零叹了口气：“还真是圣者隐归啊，怎么找都没有线索！”他找块草地，靠着树坐了下去。回想起了这一路上的事，自从上次与那欧美人老一战，新零似乎悟到了什么，那句语一直挥之不去，印在他脑海中：“从心之水面沿展出的长剑将引起惊涛……”想着想着，总有一种道不明的感觉，但就是想不通彻，这半句之词是说什么呢，还有它的下片又是什么呢？他盯着手中的剑，剑仍然是死气沉沉，没有丝毫灵气，自从上次剑魂消失后，一切都没有了感觉。也许所有的问题突存的关键就是大贤者了……新零自想道。可就在这时，一些黑影挡住了他眼前的光线，他一怔，从深思中清醒过来，眼前正站着四名黑衣人。“阁下是XG人吗？”新零刚想回答，又转念一想，如何要这样问，事出有异，他开始警觉：“你们是……”“然而，黑衣人没有理会他，互对一眼，其中一人小声道：“外貌和雇主的一样！”说完做了一个杀的手势，接着四道银光闪过。新零就明白，自己麻烦大了。迅速拔剑而起，可他发现这4个人和上次那欧美佬相比，有过而无不及，他不禁有点头号发麻。4道剑刃袭了过来，新零匆忙应付，以1剑挡4剑，可是，敌我实力不均，眼下呈现的是一副必改的局面。突然，4个黑衣裳人同时收招，不过新零没有松一口气，反而更紧张了，这时收招，莫不是要出剑拔了。哧——耳边传来一声尖锐的响声，在4个黑衣人幻化为影子般的挥斩中，无数道透明的剑芒杂无章地冲向新零，新零心冷了，自己将只有被跺成肉酱的下场，存活率也乎为0。他咬了咬牙，脸上和眼神中迸发出坚毅，他将要尽僵力地去争取，一剑剑挥出，一剑剑抽回，无数问题在他脑海膨胀起来：“我这样做的意义是什么？”“我的任务只是挽回地球，他们又是谁……”想着，脸上陡然一凉，并丝丝痛楚着。新零摸了摸，一道黏红的泫体浸染了他中指和食指。他停了下来，渐渐地，仿佛所有的事物都静了下来。新零呆汇地望着还在不断冲向他剑芒，一个个都是如此的缓慢，但将到眼前之时，又幻化成一个个张开巨嘴的恶魔，宛如要把自己吞噬。“啊——”脑海中又浮现那个蓝衣裳科学家死亡的惨叫声，无尽的酸楚，泪水逐渐打湿了他的眼睛，“从心之水面沿展出的长剑将引起惊涛……”这句话再次浮现在他脑海，一股莫名的愤怒开始膨胀起来。指甲逐渐掐入手心，双眸渐渐脱化着，满目红色，“从心之水面……引起惊涛……惊涛……惊涛！”瞬间，新零宛如弊了很久的郁闷一般，怒吼起来，体内的能量如惊聚变一般瞬间释放，一切又开始动了，新零的胸口剧烈起伏着，带着内力发出的喊叫，几欲刺穿所有人的耳膜，在方圆几公里回荡，巨大的能量冲击，瞬间将一公里之内的森林土崩瓦解，出现一个直径上百米的大坑。长剑的力量被释放出来了，他再也抑制不住了：“我是我，我不能死去，还有很多事等待我去做，命运是我自己的，谁也别想改变它，即使最终的结局一样！”猛然间，心脏的跃动中多了一种力量，这是生的力量。一个漫预的声音出现在他耳畔：“恭喜你，年轻人，你选择了正确的答案，顺着你的感觉走，一切都将结束！”看似精短的句子，却字字入耳，预美甘甜，充满了自然之美，而新零却并不去追究此话出谁之口，而却依然她之言去做了。白光过处，空间粉碎了一切，剑气宛如蛟龙一般贯穿了4人，下一刻，4个首级带着诧异滑落颈部。这充分证明了此招招出即死，他们连疼痛之感都来不及发现。再接着，上身和下身一块一块地分裂开来，慢慢地被粉碎了，新零闭了闭眼，平息着自己的情绪再次睁眼，却发现一个棕发美女出现在他眼前，他双眸剪水，高劲白皙，身材高挑，细腰盈盈一握，樱唇和罂鼻在她本就粉嫩的脸上更添光彩。新零这一次并没有像以往一样，开始打鬼心思，而是静静地望着她那详和的脸，给人一种心如止水的感觉，美丽，神圣而又可爱着，只需要这么望着就让他心里无比的宁静，一切的不快都被抛之脑后。“Perfect！”他不禁喃喃道。而从她口中传出了一个不久前曾听过的声音，宛如梦境一般，又温柔似水：“年轻人，你这几天所表现的一切已经符合了我的要求，如果想完成你的使命，请随我来！”新零突然笑了：“原来如此， 果然如长老所说非人界所有啊……”这是发自内心的赞叹，却丝毫没有欲望的渗杂，对于这种美女，新零有种卑微的感觉。
    
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26. 跟着美女走到了一个不知什么时候出现的魔法阵前，柔若无骨的纤手握住了他，他全身一怔，他渴望将这双手死死地握在自己手里永不放开，可是她太高贵了。下一刻，一卫国华光闪过，他们眼前出现了一个小花园和一幢小房子。新零立刻就明白了一切。美女松开了她的手，开始自我介绍，“年轻人，我就是大贤者堇……很高兴能见到你！”可她却迟迟等不到新零的回介绍，不过她马上就又笑了，此时的新零又被另外两个天使所吸引了，天使？没错，真是天使三对雪白无暇的羽翼长在背上，一脸的粉嫩，都拥有一亚于堇的身材与容貌，唯一不同的便是脸上的表情了，一个天真无邪，一个淡然成稳。她们两个挽着手走了过来。堇又开始介绍起来：“这两位是我的好朋友，看起来很可爱的这位是星辰雪！”“你好！”星辰雪粉脸微红，点了点头，发出的声音无比的柔软甘甜，听得新零头皮发麻，心里几乎抓猜：“Perfect!真是Perfect!我几时见过如此的尤物。”此时的新零只想将她拥入怀抱，紧紧抱住那盈盈一握的纤腰。不过此时，大贤者堇开始介绍另一位美女了，新零只能使劲吞口水。“这位是星辰水芸！”“很高兴认识你！”水芸客套道。虽然她也与星辰雪一个挡次，可惜她的声音总是冷淡的，让新零无法YY，只能敬而远之。新零明白，新下来就该他了，他微笑道：“在下新零，很高兴认识各位！”说完他伸出手准备和堇握手，可堇只是微笑，他又伸向水芸，水芸也没有动作，仍然淡淡地望着他，再伸向星辰雪，他只是脸红红的，也没有动作。新零手一颤，险些克制不住，而抓住她的手。最后没有一个人跟他握了手，他只能挠着头尴尬地笑了笑。堇看出了他的窘态，立刻解围道：“好了，新零，我们说正事吧！你找我有什么困难要我帮忙呢？”听完，新零差点就说我想抱星辰雪了，不过，他立刻克制住了。“我不是这个世界的人！”新零望着道，堇点了点头。新零补充道：“你相信？”“呵呵，你们的事，我略知一二！”堇笑道。新零也就不再啰嗦：“我想知道这个世界到底发生过什么？我闪只想将这个事情解决，来挽救我们的世界！”“实际上，错误是你们，而非我们这个世界，你们的世界终是被自己毁掉的！”堇说道“我不懂……”新零莫名其妙：“一切自会有大白，我没有办法说出什么，一切得靠你去发现，也许到时候，你就明白了！”堇说道。“那我现在该怎么做呢？”新零问道：“这才是正确的问题！不过今天你先去休息吧，明天一切都将为你揭晓……”堇笑道。
    
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28. 暮色降临，新零坐在自己的房间思索着什么，而此时，星辰雪和星辰水芸就站在他屋外聊着。“姐姐，他为什么不像上次那样躲我们了啊？”星辰雪睁着大眼睛问道。“想躲也躲不来啊，我想他一个可能是忘了，二个可能是信任大贤者，所有不怕我们！”水芸分析道。“你要真的想，就跟她去说吧！”水芸做势要走。“姐姐，你等我叫喔！”星辰雪不禁小脸粉红。“干嘛？”水芸故意问道。“好嘛，好嘛！”星辰雪在水芸怀里噌着撤娇道。“好啦！真受不了你！”水芸没好气道。“谢谢姐姐！”说完便冲进了新零房里。“这丫头进门没敲门，看来那小子可以占便宜了！”水芸双手抱叹道。“先生？先生！”星辰雪叫道。“啊？什么？怎么回事？”新零的沉思被她叫了回来，不过看见眼前的人儿，心跳竟开始加速了。不过，他假装生气：“怎么不敲门啊？吓我一跳？”一边顺势把门头了。星辰雪却不理会，依然叫道：“先生……”“得，别叫先生，叫我零哥哥，不然老公也行！”新零明白她这种性格的女孩好开玩笑。果然被水芸说中了，新零开始占她便宜了。星辰雪听后满脸通红：“别乱说……”新零能问你个问题吗？“有什么好处啊？”新零嘻笑道。“你想要什么好处？”星辰雪思想很纯，不明白新零的意思。新零突然厚脸皮了，追女孩不厚不行啊，他把星辰雪拉到边上，悄声对她耳朵说：“做我老婆？”“啊？”星辰雪大羞，“讨厌，讨厌，才不要！”她拳打脚踢一阵，新零竟直直地倒了下去。星辰雪一怔，俯下身去，有一丝担心：“你，没事吧？我好像没怎么用力啊！”当她俯到离新零脸不足5cm时，新零猛地坐起来，抱紧她，并迅速含住她的小嘴，她的脸立刻涨得鲜红，不停地挣扎，想挣脱他，可是从未碰过异性的她，突然感觉到了一个男人的体温与力量，很快就软了下来。不过小脸却越来越红，新零明白是怎么回事，可就是不松口，放肆吮吸着她的甘甜，并用舌头撑开她的樱唇，纠缠着她那可爱的不断抵抗的小舌头。新零发现触碰她舌头一次，她便会惊悸一下，还真是敏感的女孩。许久后，新零终于松开了口，她立刻喘气如牛：“呼哧，呼哧，你想弊死我啊……”可突然她又想到什么，眼眸一扁，点点晶莹开始闪烁：“人家的初吻……被你……”她也不顾还被新零抱着就那么哭了。新零傻了眼，他一时冲动，也忘了这个问题，他只有一个办法，或不成，便完蛋：“雪雪，你喜欢我吗？做我老婆好吗？如果做了我老婆，那么你的初吻就没有浪费哦！”新零一边抚着她滑 的肌肤一边呢喃道：“不要，才不要……啊……”她突然轻嗔一声，新零吻住了她的脖子，并不断顺着脖子往下吻，一直吻到胸哪两座高耸的玉峰处，虽然不是很大，但是特别地诱人。新零又问：“做不做我老婆？不做我就咬啦！”见星辰雪没反应，新零不再犹豫，立刻隔着她的上衣裳，含住了那美丽的骄傲，星辰雪又是一颤，浑身在新零怀里阵阵抖动。新零立刻加大力度吮吸那粒小红豆，星辰雪一惊悸，一下子叫出声来：“我答……应……！”星辰雪实在受不住了，一边颤抖一边答道。她的两只手被新零死死抱在身后，无法推开他，胸部的感觉又令她难以抑制，只好投降。新零这才松开口，星辰雪使劲喘了口气，瞪着他，“你……强……我！”“强你？强什么你？”新零故意问道。只见星辰雪脸又红了，他吻着她脸红的地方，温柔地说道：“小妮子什么时候喜欢我的啊？这么随便就答应做我老婆”“切，少臭美，是你逼的，哎，别说啦，我有事问你！”星辰雪想挣脱他。但他就是不放，“有什么事就这样说嘛，反正你是我老婆有什么关系嘛！”“谁是你老婆呀！”星辰雪嘟起小嘴。“咦？不是吗？那可能我听错了，继续咬！”新零又低下头去含住她的胸部。她怕了，只好一边颤抖一边说道“新零……零哥呵……啊……老公！”喊到老公，新零才松口：“什么事啊，老婆？”星辰雪望着他那无耻的样子，道：“给我一点时间考虑，我真的无法一下答应你！”看着星辰雪楚楚可怜，新零真想立刻吃了她，可惜女孩不能急逼，否则只会适得其反，新零只好松开她。星辰雪一下软倒在地，看来她确实受到了巨大的刺激。她爬了起来红着脸问道：“其实我来是想问一下……你喜欢火还是冰？”她问的时候不敢抬头。“火？冰……什么火……”突然，新零明白了她的意思，咯咯邪笑道：“原来小姐思春啦，难怪都不怎么抵抗！当然是火啦！”星辰雪一怔，娇艳欲滴的小脸又是一阵红晕，她小声说道：“你的要求我会考虑一下！”然后撤腿就跑出了房间。只留下新零不断地笑，不断地笑。
    
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30. 本见星辰雪进去这么久都不出来的水芸就奇怪了，再看到她一脸的通红连路都走不好了，也就明白了：“妹妹，你真的和他……”“没……不……我想考虑一下……”星辰雪声细如蚊。“哎，你真的喜欢他？”水芸问道。星辰雪默默点了点头：“从第一次见到他和那种性格就……”说到这，星辰雪脸又红了。水芸听到这里，又看到她衣杉不整，一种酸酸的感觉充沛了她的心房，连她自己也不明白怎么回事。“那哥哥会同意吗？”水芸问道。“哥哥最疼我们的，一定会！”星辰雪一脸的幸福。“那你还考虑什么，你这不已经答应了吗？”水芸调笑道。“啊，姐姐，你欺负我，不理你了！”说完，好就一溜烟跑了。水芸笑着看到她消失，心里酸味再次涌起，她眼睛望了望新零的房间，一脸的哀怨，不过很快她便离开了。不过这一切被躲在屋顶的堇看到了，：“好小子，艳福离你不远了！”她笑道。
    
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32. 第二天，新零起了个大早，起床第一件事就冲到星辰雪门口等着一个小时后，星辰雪打开门，吓一跳：“你……你干嘛？”她看到新零直直地站在门口盯着她：“你决定了吗？”新零认真地问道。“啊……什么？”星辰雪心里一阵紧张，心跳加速。“算了！”新零不想再点明，看来事还不成啊，他低下头：“对不起……昨天……不好意思……可是……”他再次抬起头轻声道：“我真的喜欢你—一开始或许是肉体，可现在连你的心灵……我也……”他突然停住了：“我会等！”说完，便离开了。这时水芸从屋里走了出来：“干嘛不答应！”而星辰雪却一动不动望着他离开的地方：“姐姐，我好怕……一见钟情真的存在吗？”“虚实中的情本就为空，喜欢就是喜欢，不曾存在什么介质，所谓的一见钟情不过是一个堂而皇之的借口罢了，爱情是跟着感觉走的……千万不要背叛了自己！”水芸说完，见星辰雪点了点头，自己不禁扪心自道：“可是……这么说着，为什么我又如此对待自己的感情呢？情……为何物……”她一脸的深沉。
    
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34. 新零独自走到了风口中，在凭大风卷拂着自己的行装，过往的一切在他脑海流窜，他其实是在害怕，但他发现他来到这个世界之时，他就明白了，“什么拯救世界？其实不过是逃离毁灭的借口，又想到借晚的亢奋，因为害怕得不到心中的人儿，竟用那种无耻的手段，而且还抢走了一个女孩非常重要的东西……我到底在干什么……”他脑袋不禁开始有些炫晕。“新零……”身后传来一个柔美的声音他头也不回，来者是谁他已经很清楚了：“大贤者，可以开始了！”堇笑了笑：“这小子还身在福中不知福呢！”堇走到他身边，“这里风大，回花园吧！”说完，两人便一左在右地往回走。“我有个问题想问你！”新零突然想到了什么。“问！”堇望着他。“我听别人说你不善接近，可我发现完全不是那么回事！”新零也望向了她。“呵呵，你想让我那样吗？”堇笑道。“呃……当然—不！”新零忙解释。“说白了，对自己的朋友我才不会那样……而你比较幸运的……让我居然欣赏你……所以你还是第一个成为我愿意接近的人！”堇又笑了：“怎么样？你是想开始正事，还是和我聊天？”“哦……正事，当然！”新零有些尴尬。“好……”堇突然收剑了笑容：“呈我昨天所言，你的使命已经很明确，这是你的目标，于是你目前要做的无非不是成为一个强者，只有拥有强横的力量，你才能不受约束地去做自己想做的事。”“嗯……可是……如何强大？”新零问道：“成为一个强者不是教你做饭，这不是评议所能表达的东西，它靠的是一种悟性。”堇望了望新零：“你是一个剑武士吧！”新零点头。“一个剑士，要强大起来并不是有多么强的力量与无与伦比的技巧，而是对剑的悟性，一把好剑是有灵性的，你若能感觉到他的气息，才能成为真正的剑客！”堇伸出手：“你那种剑给我看看可以吗？”“哦当然！”新零立刻抽出了剑。堇一怔，使劲睁大了眼，“这是……”她一脸惊异接了过来，用那双玉手轻抚着光滑的银刃。“有什么问题吗？”新零看不到有什么不对。“最终的决定是在灵魂徘徊之后……”她突然念起一段如诗般的句子：“当鲜血融入记忆，一切才会终结……”“错不了了……这是……”她无比激动起来：“新零，你知道这是什么剑吗？”“……剑……？”新零还是不解。“这是神剑啊，你不知道吗？”堇又转念一想也就释然了，千年未现的神剑，他一个外人又怎么可能明了？“堇，虽然不知道是什么剑，但是我知道它拥有十分可怕的力量，可是我却无法自由激发！”新零期待地望着堇。“不，错了，新零，你有多少时间？”堇问道：“有的是！”新零道。“我来教他！”这时身后传来另一个娇美而又冷淡的声音.堇的笑了：“新零，正戏开始了！”“谁说不是呢？”新零立刻也明白了。
    
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雪流星

{/gg}果然，难怪全部都是「逐字」翻译{/gg}{/gg}

语法错误：无
文法错误：∞
表达错误：∞

苏菲娅

我说怎么晦涩得没法看呢...真要挑错又挑不出什么来...

建议金山的翻译引擎除词法和语法外还要加上语用分析...{/gg}