[求助]会英语的帮帮我

光郎

我今天能不能吃到晚饭就靠大家了T.T。自测卷好难啊- -
下面每段话都可能有一处错误，帮忙找一下~

On Childrens'Day last year,our city held an interesting activity,
in which children and their parents play thf poor,
In the dinner,thf rich could have more delicious food,but
the poor could only have bread with porridge.
Parents both hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children.
They hoped that their children could be taught the lesson from
the dinner.Nnw many people don't have enough food and clothes.
Every day only one half the world can enjoy enough food.The activity
was held to make people understand the difFerences from the poor and the rich and also makes parents know that too much material life
won't always do good to the children.

訫﹎森

不会的人路过``少吃一点不会死```正好减肥。

光郎

那个是笔误- -THE

光郎

小殇好厉害- -下午爆一个给我哦~

禾西

On Childrens'Day last year,our city held an interesting activity,
in which children and their parents play thf poor,
In the dinner,thf rich could have more delicious food,but
the poor could only have bread with porridge.
Parents both hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children.
They hoped that their children could be taught the lesson from
the dinner.Nnw many people don't have enough food and clothes.
Every day only one half the world can enjoy enough food.The activity
was held to make people understand the difFerences from the poor and the rich and also makes parents know that too much material life
won't always do good tothe children.
你確認上面每段话都可能有一处错误？＝＝|||

光郎

……手机打字母，难免有失误。
abc def ghi jkl这样3个字母拼写错误的应该是我写错了- -
每行确实只有一个。

trentswd

只发现一点- -不负责，仅供参考……
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On Childrens'Day last year,our city held an interesting activity,
in which children and their parents play（ed） thf poor,
In the dinner,thf rich could have more delicious food,but
the poor could only have bread with porridge.
Parents both hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children.
They hoped that their children could be taught the lesson from
the dinner.Nnw many people don't have enough food and clothes.
Every day only one half the world can enjoy enough food.The activity
was held to make people understand the difFerences （between） the poor and the rich and also (to make) parents know that too much material life
(wouldn't) always do good to the children.

小柯

很勉强的看懂一点……|||