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小湖

还是英文比拼音看着舒服－ －

暴风の龙

以下引用小湖于2007-7-25 22:10:43的发言：

还是英文比拼音看着舒服－ －

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I think my "pingyin" is better than English.......so.......

yangff

翻译：
上星期五放学回家时，在偶家门前看见一沱大便，当时偶吃了一斤：「谁介么缺德，在偶家门前拉大便。」　

偶赶快叫妹妹出来，妹妹看了也吃了一斤，破囗道：「尊米公德心！介么米水准！」姊姊叫偶拿扫把一起扫掉。　

妈妈知道后也出来看，同样也吃了一斤，叫道：「作孽喔！」　

爸爸听到妈妈滴叫声赶快出来看个究竟，也吃了一斤。「谁干滴？」　

邻居王妈妈刚买菜回来，看了也吃了一斤。王伯伯、王小明粗乃看也都吃了一斤，不一会儿聚集了十多人，大家都吃了一斤，最后打119，消防队员棉在吃了一斤后总算把那沱大便给清除了，真是最难忘滴一件事。　



导师评语：　

有进步　

但要注意错别字 是「吃了一惊」 不是「吃了一斤」　

这沱大便总共有二十来斤 哪个人有这本事？



While releasing from school to go home on last Friday, at accidentally the family saw a 沱 the bowels ago, ate 1 tael accidentally at that time:"Who lie? unscrupulous, at accidentally the family spaced out ago then."

Be a sister accidentally and at once thick is, the sister saw also eat 1 tael, break a 囗 way:The "rice social morality! lie? rice water allow!" sister calls to take broom accidentally to sweep together.

The mother knows behind also thick is seeing, the same also ate 1 tael, calling a way:"Do misdeed oh!"

Father's hearing a mother drop interjection hurry up thick is actually seeing, also ate 1 tael."Who do drop?"

Neighbor's mother Wang2 just bought vegetables back, seeing also eat 1 tael.Uncle Wang2, king is small clear and thick is seeing also all eat 1 tael, came together more than ten silvers not and in a short while, everyones ate 1 tael, beating finally 119, the fireman cotton moved bowels that 沱 to the clearance on the whole after eating 1 tael, the vegetable is the most difficult to forget drop a matter.



Tutor's comment:

Have a progress

But want to notice not plain"ate 1 tael" of"ate a surprised" of the wrong character vegetable

Lie 沱 the bowels to have altogether 20 come to tael which silver have already lain skill?

ю殘劒唫轌Θ

回LZ，看过了～呵呵～

暴风の龙

以下引用暗之影于2007-7-25 22:20:29的发言：

LS是给看不懂繁体字的人看的?0 0

基本我学校那里看繁体字都是一个个的方块……{/gg}
话说为什么连英文版也有……

精灵使者

= =我可不想吃……

电鳗

有些不懂繁体,LZ能用简体中文吗?

千年狐狸精

老师同学一起装可爱,,

兲！

ok,thanks

I'm in school now
here I can't type chinese.......orz
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翻译:
好,感谢我的学校在这里,现在我不能型中国燃.......
{/kuk}